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Are you blind to my misery,
Or do you choose not to look?
I want to share my story,
But you close me like a book.

I'm screaming as I cry,
But you refuse to hear.
Look away as I die,
Ignore each little tear.

Am I not loud enough?
Is that why you ignore my scream?
My life is tough,
Help me escape this bad dream.

I scream a bit higher.
Please, I need your help!
My circumstances are dire.
I'm losing myself.

But you do not help me,
And I've decided to give up.
Maybe then you'll see.
Ha! That's just my luck.
I wrote this today, my first submission since i got sick. Hope you like it.
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AnythingBtOrdinary May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! Reminds me of my struggle with SI back in highschool. My friends blew my cuts off as not a big deal (even though I outright told them that they were the reason I was doing this to myself). I love it when honest people who don't even know me can take my feelings and express them in a non-sugar coated poem. You seem like a real person (like not fake) who knows how to express real ideas and like me isn't afraid to speak their mind and say the things that most people are afraid to hear.
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lostmyslef May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've had the same problem for years
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lostmyslef May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Again, don't know you. But thanks, I guess. Please don't call me your "love" I'm in a relationship.
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lostmyslef Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you =)
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1DragonKitty3 Feb 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Quite lovely....it speaks volumes.
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lostmyslef Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
why thank you
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RenosGirl77 Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
One good thing about people dragging you down/ignoring your pain: it makes you extra sensitive to unspoken pain and the feelings of others, so you can help them even though people failed to help you. My kids will never suffer alone because of what I had to go through as a kid. :)
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lostmyslef Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
true, I guess we become more understanding and caring people, god knows the world needs more of them.
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