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I can't breathe.
It's too tight.
I hear so many things,
can't trust my sight.

The monsters surround.
No, they're not really here.
They reach out to grab me.
They smell my fear.

Have I finally lost my mind?
Am I totally insane?
Is this all in my head?
Is it just a sick game?

Or are they really there?
Do they smile as I scream?
Do they laugh at my tears?
Please, let this be a dream.

But it's not a dream.
I can't get out.
A hand surrounds my neck,
no air to shout.

Tears stream freely.
They start to close in.
I pray to god to help me,
to forgive all my sin.

The world starts to fade.
I can no longer see.
I smile in bliss.
I'm finally free.
This is a poem I wrote in social studies class when I should have been paying attention....... o well......
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TrappedWithinMyMind Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this :)
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lostmyslef Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad =)
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:iconmagicaljoey:
I like how the monsters can reflect depression, Schizophrenia or even a combination of mental illnesses.
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lostmyslef Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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HippoStylist Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the awkward moment when you sing this as you read it and find out its a poem... I really need a hobby.
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lostmyslef Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
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HippoStylist Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Seriously, I have a problem
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o, it's ok. I do it all the time. only i assume songs are poems
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:iconhippostylist:
HippoStylist Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
We're just like eachother... Only different! 0.0
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o. m. g. 0.o
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