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The music swirls all around,
till all I hear is the joyous sound,
twirling, spinning, moving me,
and the endless notes are all I see.

The beat becomes my hearts own.
I feel as though the light has shown,
and all the sadness fades away,
and I finally see a happier day.

My lips part, and I sing along
To such a redeeming, beautiful song.
These moments come and go too fast.
I enjoy them greatly as they last.

I laugh in glee.
I feel so free.
What magic is this,
this utter bliss?

Stay with me, my pretty song,
with you the days don't seem so long.
With you I am so filled with hope,
I know with you, somehow I'll cope.

Together we'll stay.
You'll scare the darkness away,
Yes, stay here my friend,
play your notes till my end,

and with your melody in my ears,
I'll go without any silly fears.
I'll meet my maker with you at my side,
then he'll hold me close, no need to hide.

Yes, my song, you'll get me there,
with your notes, and tune, so full of care.
You'll be my very dearest friend,
until my beautiful, blissful end.
This is probably the happiest poem I've ever written. I'm in the happiest mood I've been in in a long time, and usually i think my happy poems are terrible, but I don't know, I kinda like this one =) so enjoy, all you amazing people! Love you!
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InGodzHandz Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like happy poems! This group needs more of them.
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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InGodzHandz Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013   Writer
It is very bubbly - but then music is knows to affect moods - if you are happy and you play sombre music you become less happy. That's why people who are in a certain mood usually play music that suits that mood - example, when I feel depressed I play slower songs or songs with lyrics that reflect what I'm thinking.
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ncgirl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this! It has such good rhythm and yes, makes me want to dance! Well done!
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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kessa5 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
and it can all ao bea song if you put the right music to it
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
true
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kessa5 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
uuuh
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OpenStory Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice, Lizard! :) wish I could write happy... Glad you had a true good mood.
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