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Heart beats fast,
fingers tapping,
nerves are stretching,
so close to snapping.

Try to calm down.
Take a deep breath,
feel so weak,
so close to death.

Nervously shaking,
and the clock's ticking slow.
When will it be over?
When's my time to go?

Can't wait,
about to break.
God, I'm here,
my soul to take.

Take it now.
I'm really done,
tired of fighting,
don't want to run.

I just want to rest,
just want to sleep,
take me forever,
my soul to keep.
It's awful, I know. But I needed to get it out there, and off of my chest.
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:iconmiuru-chan:
This is not awful, this AMAZING!!
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:iconfoganddreams:
its so amazing!
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks =)
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:iconcandyzombielord:
candyzombielord Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing poem. really great and emotional. i wish to see more of your work. so you have just gained a follower.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!!!!
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:iconcandyzombielord:
candyzombielord Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for writing such a great poem. :)
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure =)
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:iconmagicaljoey:
It's not awful ducks. You are quite good with rhyme. As for the subject matter, well, at least you are getting it off of your chest this way (and hopefully not in others too).

Please keep my soul until I wake,
This life I own's not mine to take.
I stagger blindly, trying to fight,
While other waltz within the light.

Please keep my soul and keep it safe.
Although I never want to wake
I know one day this pain will cease,
And I will then my own soul keep.
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Annuski Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Wow...awful? Yes. Amazing? Yes.

You have an amazing talent!
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