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I tried to smile,
laugh through the pain,
but it's been a while,
I think I'm insane.

I can't hear my own voice.
The one that says what I want.
Now I have no choice.
You never did, it taunts.

It tells me what I should say.
It tells me who I am.
It tells me everyday.
Am I the lion or the lamb?

Am I as weak as I feel,
or as strong as I pretend?
Am I cold and hard as steel,
or just waiting for it to end?

Who am I?
Do I really want to know?
I end with a sigh.
The voice is telling me to go.
This is a poem I wrote in two seconds, so if it's awful just, you know, whatever. I've had a really confusing week because of the things I just described so just let me vent.
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:iconmariaactually:
This is totally how I feel! Loved it
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lostmyslef Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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rezhamarq Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know the feels...It's a good poem!
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconrezhamarq:
rezhamarq Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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DarkMysticRose Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can really relate to this poem! I'm still trying to figure out who I am and what I'm going to do with my life. It really stirred up a lot emotions inside me. Great job! ^^
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lostmyslef Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, i love it when someone relates to my poems! Makesme feel a little less crazy =P
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:iconmagicaljoey:
I've been there, not knowing which part of myself to listen to. But hold on.
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lostmyslef Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm doing my best. Thank you! =)
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:iconmagicaljoey:
You're doing well - writing helps
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