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Not good enough for me,
not good enough for you,
maybe all the insults
are simply what's true.

What can I say?
Nothing, I'm done,
so sick and tired
of having to run.

So this is the end,
the last puzzle piece,
the very last straw,
the pain will soon cease.

I won't have to struggle.
There will be no pain,
and everyone's lives
will go on quite the same.

Because I am just me.
The greatest disappointment of all.
So say good-bye,
as I start my free fall.
Hey guys, I'm sorry. Today I realized that I haven't posted a poem in a very long time, so here you go, I whipped this one up for you guys really fast. It's not so good, but hey, it's something. It's written to my mom, who is always pushing me, which I know is not neccesarily a bad thing, except when your puched past your own personal limits, which is what she does to me.
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RaphAndRoll Mar 19, 2014  New member Student Traditional Artist
I hope you were joking when you said 'not so good' because it wasn't 'good' at all. It was absolutely fantastic!!! (The Hoff? No. Okay)
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lostmyslef Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm glad you love my work so much. 
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RaphAndRoll Mar 20, 2014  New member Student Traditional Artist
Everything you write is filled with new hope to live another day and it gives so many the strength to fight on. Trust me I'm only one of the many that love your work.
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lostmyslef Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and I'm so glad to help people through my work. It makes me feel like I can make a difference
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RaphAndRoll Mar 30, 2014  New member Student Traditional Artist
No prob. You really can.
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UntamedRayne Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not so good? It's awesome! I know what it's like to never feel good enough. Keep up the writing :hug:
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Damn. This one really hits home.
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AnotherFallenAngelx Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love itt !
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lostmyslef Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad!
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AnythingBtOrdinary May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Again you never cease to amaze me!:)
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