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I know you need help.
It's so plain to see.
Please don't hurt yourself.
You can count on me.

I'll hold you when it's tough,
wrap you up tight.
I know life is rough,
but I'll be your light.

I love you, I do.
You're everything to me.
you don't believe it's true,
but I want to set you free.

I'll be your rock
when all your strength is gone.
I'll be your lock
when everythings gone wrong.

So please don't cry,
my love, my life.
I know you want to die,
but I'll help you through the strife.

Because I'll be there to catch you
when everything falls apart.
I love you, it's so true,
with all of my heart.
Allow me to explain one line, "I'll be your lock" you see, my whole life I've always had this sort of weightless feeling, like I'm not really here at all, and I've always wanted something that would "lock" me into reality for a little while. Okay, now an explanation for the poem itself. It's a love poem.......to myself? Alright, I had this dream the night before I wrote this where I had tried to commit suicide, and I was now in a rehab clinic, and my boyfriend came to see me, and he writes me poems every now and then, and in the dream, this is the poem he wrote for me. So basically i subconciously wrote myself a love poem.....wow right? Anyway, I think it's pretty good considering that it is exactly, EXACTLY, down to the very last word, the poem from the dream, so yeah, for a poem that was constructed while I was in lala land, I think it's pretty good, so noone give me any crap about it, alright? love you guys!
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love to read your lala land poetry. It has so much meaning and the power of your words it's enough to keep the most hopeless going
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. That's probably fifty-five percent of the reason I write it.
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No thanks needed. You dedicate time to give the weak, the strength they need to hold on to life and live as long as God intended them to live.
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emmabeirsack Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Holy crap! You my friend must keep writing!
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much and I'll do my best =)
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emmabeirsack Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
yayyy!!!
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AnythingBtOrdinary Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WOW! I've had dreams about songs but I could never remember them when I woke up. GOD HAS GIVEN YOU A GIFT! CONTINUE TO USE IT TO BLESS OTHERS! NEVER STOP WRITING!:)
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, you really like to leave comments =) and thank you so much,
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Batgirl2013 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Writer
I think everyone has felt like nothing before... I know I have but its the way we deal with it that helps us... I hope you realize that there are people who care and want you here
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, and I try to tell myself that
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