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The darkness grabs,
it holds on tight.
I try to evade,
but I can't find the light.

Let me go!
I want to live,
but it does not tire.
It does not give.

I'm fading away,
can't find myself.
Someone, please!
Anyone, help.

But no one hears my cry.
The darkness smiles in glee.
As I've lost myself all together.
I will never be free.
This is how I feel when I can't remember who I really am anymore.
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WolfAtHeartForever Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like this a lot. Thank you
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no problem thank you!
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WolfAtHeartForever Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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Lost--Destiny Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Magic darkness.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thanks
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
The darkness can have a strong hold - for many years. But there will come a moment when something or someone fights through and reaches you, and then it recedes.
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish that would happen soon.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
Mine took 15 years.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, looks like I have a while to wait
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013   Writer
I love this poem, but I do hope you feel better! :)
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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foxythecutefox Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwe....Life is hard ik...I have trouble too..and I love the poem though...but feel better D:
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks =)
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foxythecutefox Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome (: Just remember when you're feeling down try to keep you're head up high! ^^
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1bookfish Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really do hope you feel better soon... you don't deserve this... :tighthug: You will be free someday... I know it...
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, at least there are people that believe in me
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1bookfish Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, I know you can make it through this ^o^
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clarissabelle Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Elizabeth. Singer. Painter. Writer. Poet. Best friend. Girlfriend. Sister. SBFFLFE. Baby-sitter. Animal lover. Artist. Blonde. Funny. All of these are just labels. By labeling yourself, you THINK you know who you are, but "it is only when you do not know, that you truly know who you are." -the brilliant Clarissa.
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow. Ever thought of looking in the mirror and saying that?
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No. Have YOU?
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no
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clarissabelle Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I concur.
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