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There once was a boy,
there once was a girl.
He loved the girl dearly,
and the boy was her world.

The boy was kind,
and would be there to stay,
but the girl was broken.
She yearned to fly away.

The boy wouldn't let go,
he was determined to fix her,
but there was no secret,
no miracle cure.

She simply had to go,
set herself free.
This was the answer,
the only true key.

He wouldn't give up,
so she had to shove.
It was all in good interest,
all because of love.

But the boy was so patient,
so determined and kind,
he wouldn't give up.
She made up her mind.

There would be one last push,
one last try
before she had to give up,
let herself die.

The boy won't like it.
He'll try to fight.
It will hurt the girl greatly,
but she has to do what's right.

So I'm sorry, so sorry,
for what I have to do,
but please, please remember,
I truly, really love you.
No celebration, claire, save the champagne, it's just a poem. Just some feelings I needed to get out.
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KurosPassions Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
any body can change there ways if they want them self to 
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Annika-san Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Student Writer
are you telling someones story? I've been reading your work and i feel as if it is a variety of peoples' stories.
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I try to write so that I can let my own feelings out while relating to others so, in a weird way that probably is all in my head and doesn't really happen, they get their feelings out too while reading it. So, yeah it's my story, but I've written it so that other people with the same or similar story can relate.
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mymico13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
Wow, it's so beautiful
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you =)
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Psychopickle Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
ever read dostoevsky's The Idiot? It's basically this but 600 pages long
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope, but I'm a book worm, I'll try to check it out, thanks!
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Writer
Oooooohhhhhhh sounds interesting! >:-)
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TheZayofZays Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This jerked me emotionally.
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm glad. It's always good to know that your work brings up some sort of emotion in the reader. =)
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