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She smiled,
but it was fake.
She laughed,
but she's about to break.

She reached out,
but no one came,
tried to fake it,
but the pain stayed the same.

This girl, she called to you,
but you didn't care.
Something told you to help,
but you didn't dare.

What would the others say?
The ones who called her a freak.
They may taunt or shun you,
so you choose not to speak.

Then she decides to leave.
Because no one wants her here.
You'll never see her cry.
She'll never shed another tear.
Sorry, I wrote this at school today, all over my hand, and I don't think it's all that great, but I figured, what the heck? I need to get the message out that if you see someone like me, who's dying inside, and is fighting everyday just to smile, don't ignore it, try to help.
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AnythingBtOrdinary Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Story of my life! As much as it kills me to know that there are tons of people out there who are on the edge and want to end it all. Those are the ones who not only make the best writers but are also those that the world needs the most of. Shake things up and make people realize that depression (even at its smallest) is not a joke!
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, it makes me so glad that someone finally understands my message in all my poems
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chainedheart977 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Take a look if you want [link] (The link is a poem a wrote close to the subject)
Below it is a lot of words about what I think on the subject.
( I wish people could just get along, then things like this wouldn't happen. )
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Lynn-10397 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Thats so sad :(
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's meant to be. <- that sounds snippy but it's not supposed to....
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TheVibeke Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This lovely deviation has been featured here: [link] :heart:

Have an amazing day! :thanks:
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O wow! Thank you so much!!!!
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TheVibeke Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No problem dear! :hug:
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clarissabelle Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, out of curiosity, what did those comments you hid say?
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lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o i accidentally sent the same message 4 times because my phone's retarded
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