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She smiled,
but it was fake.
She laughed,
but she's about to break.

She reached out,
but no one came,
tried to fake it,
but the pain stayed the same.

This girl, she called to you,
but you didn't care.
Something told you to help,
but you didn't dare.

What would the others say?
The ones who called her a freak.
They may taunt or shun you,
so you choose not to speak.

Then she decides to leave.
Because no one wants her here.
You'll never see her cry.
She'll never shed another tear.
Sorry, I wrote this at school today, all over my hand, and I don't think it's all that great, but I figured, what the heck? I need to get the message out that if you see someone like me, who's dying inside, and is fighting everyday just to smile, don't ignore it, try to help.
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AnythingBtOrdinary Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Story of my life! As much as it kills me to know that there are tons of people out there who are on the edge and want to end it all. Those are the ones who not only make the best writers but are also those that the world needs the most of. Shake things up and make people realize that depression (even at its smallest) is not a joke!
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, it makes me so glad that someone finally understands my message in all my poems
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chainedheart977 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Take a look if you want [link] (The link is a poem a wrote close to the subject)
Below it is a lot of words about what I think on the subject.
( I wish people could just get along, then things like this wouldn't happen. )
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:iconlynn-10397:
Lynn-10397 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Thats so sad :(
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's meant to be. <- that sounds snippy but it's not supposed to....
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:iconthevibeke:
TheVibeke Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This lovely deviation has been featured here: [link] :heart:

Have an amazing day! :thanks:
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O wow! Thank you so much!!!!
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:iconthevibeke:
TheVibeke Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No problem dear! :hug:
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, out of curiosity, what did those comments you hid say?
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o i accidentally sent the same message 4 times because my phone's retarded
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
......idiot.
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CoyoteDove Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I completely agree, I'm like you, If I see others I help, because I know how it feels. I don't care what others say, a friend in need is my friend indeed.
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:iconanimekaratechick2322:
I completely agree! This is like my everyday life :/ if you ever need to talk about anything I'm here for you. You can send me a personal message if you need to. just know that you're not alone and there are plenty of us that understand and want to help. :)
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! That's always good to know =)
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:iconkaorisilvermoon:
KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I totally get this.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know whether to be happy or sad
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:iconkaorisilvermoon:
KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Be both. It's what people like us do, right?
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
True, very sadly true.
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:iconkaorisilvermoon:
KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But we're survivors.
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the flow to this. Filled with emotion. Nice job.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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:iconmariaactually:
Mariaactually Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Wow! Do you come up with this all by yourself? :o I can really relate to this, I hope you feel better soon though(:
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol, yes i did, and thank you, I hope so too
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manly-unicorn Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
i can relate ):
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well it's good to know I'm not alone, but I'm sorry you feel this way
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corporalmaxsterling Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
well written
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ILOVETHISIWISHICOULDWRITEJUSTLIKETHISBUTISUCK
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol, thanks i guess, but don't sell yourself short!
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:iconscr1b3:
Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) How do you get your inspiration?
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Everyday life, people that i've turned to for help and have run away, passing it off as lies or me looking for attention.
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:iconscr1b3:
Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh that's so sad! If it helps, I'm here...
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, it helps a little
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Scr1b3 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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TheArtistyk Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So simply sad...and beautiful~ :heart: I do hope you get through what you're going through. Don't lose hope, and keep it up, writing these beautiful kinds of poems. :hug:
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow, thanks!!
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:icontheartistyk:
TheArtistyk Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're more than welcome~
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:icontharamin-thar:
Tharamin-Thar Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lets be the holding hands guy cuz thats my life to. I hope it gets better for you
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol, thanks =)
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:icontharamin-thar:
Tharamin-Thar Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome
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KittyKat0503 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
This is amazing on so many levels!! </3
Its sad, but beautiful <3
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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silentnature Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good scribble.

I liked how you kept it simple without excessive fluff.
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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:iconwhitekawaiitiger:
whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is really good ^-^ i like the meaning behind this and i hope you get through what you are feeling :hug:
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:iconlostmyslef:
lostmyslef Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! =)
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:iconwhitekawaiitiger:
whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome :D :meow: :dance:
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